Portable Trade Show

ESL questions -Dear English teachers, please help me proofread below paragraphs (please polish the expression)

We are so excited about the coming machinery exhibitions in your country where we may have more potential opportunities to promote ABC machines and expose ABC brand name to the worldwide. We truly understand that you may not only carry ABC machines at the exhibitions and you may promote other competitors' machines in the meanwhile, but we believe it will be a good marketing strategy if we propose to show ABC logos at the exhibition booth (please refer to the attached photo for your reference). According to the attached photos, you may have a brief idea on the ABC logos by which you need to be aware of the pantone-purple and the logo format. The predominate purpose of exposing ABC logos at the exhibitions is to draw all end-users' attentions and build up the global brand images in the machinery industry.Again, please kindly take photos of ABC logos on the exhibitions and send to us to show how well you present and expose ABC logos. Dear all ESL teachers, please help me proofread my expression in English and polish my expression in Enlgihs. Hope the way I express can make senses to all the readers ...Thanks a lot

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  1. I will alter and replace some words to efficiently communicate your intent and consequent understanding to the receiver. We are considerably excited about the upcoming machinery exhibitions in your country where we may have more potential opportunities to promote ABC machines and expose the ABC brand name to a worldwide audience. We truly understand that you will not only promote ABC machines but other competitors' machines as well at the exhibition. In retrospect, we believe it will be an effective marketing strategy if we propose to show ABC logos at the exhibition booth (please refer to the attached photo for your reference). According to the attached photos, you may have a concise idea of ABC logos. You need to be aware of the pantone-purple and the logo format. The predominate purpose of exposing ABC logos at the exhibitions is to draw all end-users' attention and to further improve our global brand image in the machinery industry. Again, please kindly use the attached photos of ABC logos at the exhibitions and debrief us on your presentation and public exposure of the ABC logos.
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